Definition of peace i googled :
"Peace is a state of balance and understanding in yourself and between others" ..Redefined :
Peace.
White on paper.
Tree from train.
Ocean from bay.
Sky from earth.
and you from my memories.
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The ambiguity of expressions. The black seconds of life.. Like the colors of a faded rainbow.. The heart beats missed..
""One moment of lost myself.. And the footprints of remains left in me... Till now..still now.. I do believe that.. that.. What i believe wasn't true.. Unilluminated.""
The peace prevails and pulse remains...
whoa you are amazing....
ReplyDeletei am in love with the last line =D
small tip, take care of the grammar when you frame the sentences....
bravo!! i am proud =D
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ReplyDeletegrammar kaunsi jagah ??..tell me so that ill edit n post again di..
ReplyDeletegreat!!!
ReplyDeletespell bounding!!
1 opinion i wanna share:
the lifetime of every defination is short:(
may be u shouldn't think that you were wrong at 1 point of time..
no leave this as it is..
ReplyDeleteoriginal ka essence rahega!!
More than the pulse, I liked 'Peace' so much better here :)
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